Asoka- Adult Design

Asoka, from Clone Wars or whatever this series is called. I was watching it baby siting my nef and ... I really don't like peppy do go girls in series, I find them really annoying. But I bet in another style Asoka is really pretty, so I did a grown up version of her just trying to be creative.
BTW I don't know a whole ton about star wars so don't kill me if something is not right. Will probably move to scraps.

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